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The Princess And The Pirate (WIP)

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A work in progress. Can't wait for the finished product. :) Again, this is just something I did while I was sick. I was running a temp of 101.3 and just couldn't sleep ( even after taking medicine), so I decided to draw instead. Drawing always helps me feel better and helps me sleep.
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Sick days kinda suck awful, but it's good you kept yourself occupied. I don't think I'd be able to think straight or even work properly on an off day. Well, as far as critiquing goes, my main concern is the female character on the lower right. I feel her eyes are oddly placed. It feels as if the eye is going off into the side of her head, maybe even on her cheek. Because of that eye, I then see a sort of disagreement with the neck and the body. The shoulders seem a bit stiff, but other than that it looks alright.